By The River. Poem by Brian James Caffrey

By The River.

Rating: 4.8


The sun cutting through the clouds,
Landing on the water,
Like liquid crystal.

The gentle trickling almost undisturbed,
Except for the faint cheeps,
Echoes of the river.

The frequent tugs on the line,
Remind me of the life underneath,
This tranquil landscape.

Suddenly the silence is shattered,
The rod shakes, the fish caught,
Momentary chaos sweeps the bank.

Thursday, January 28, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: fishing,peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first ever poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jake Shelvey 02 February 2010

Beautifully described, really smooth. It's a great poem!

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Bethany Giles 28 January 2010

i trhink thT IT IS GOOD

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