Unwritten Soul


By The Kiss Of Starlight


Silent night
Awaken my mind on you
As i see your face painted on the moon
Breathe me out all of my warm breaths
Riding on the wind, running to you
Whispering sound to think of me
My voice echoes in your sweet dream
Hope it shelters you warmly
As it resides inside
Sleep in your heart
Hold me tight
When i say goodnight
By the kiss of starlight

Submitted: Saturday, October 05, 2013
Edited: Sunday, October 06, 2013

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It just a simple write i did for my lil goodnite song

From star to moon...gud nite

Comments about this poem (By The Kiss Of Starlight by Unwritten Soul )

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (12/7/2013 5:52:00 PM)

    So very beautiful and oh so loving. I loved this and happy I chose to read it today! Thank you.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (11/12/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    ... nice write.... i love the first five lines... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    Romance fills the night with the thought of a loved one! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,308 Points Ken E Hall (10/30/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    A simple simply luvli dream in your heart sealed by the kiss of starlight...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (10/23/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, my friend, and it includes some of my favorite things, the moon,
    and the stars. Loved the warmth brought to the reader~ through your words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,183 Points Valerie Dohren (10/21/2013 12:38:00 PM)

    A lovely goodnight poem Soul. Very imaginative and romantic. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,226 Points Ramesh Rai (10/17/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    beauty has an endless task. amazing beauty penned thro beaitiful soul. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,729 Points Kee Thampi (10/15/2013 11:25:00 AM)

    a r) eue story in poem.................................. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (10/14/2013 11:19:00 PM)

    Wonderful, my freind, it touches the heart. It reflects the warm feeling appreciation for mother nature
    Very poetic, excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,085 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/8/2013 2:42:00 PM)

    A fabulous poem, öne of yor best, ravishing wording! Sleep tight, sweet dreams pal! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (10/8/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    Simplicity is often the most magnificent.... Great! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Rekha Mandagere (10/7/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    What a lovely song on good night! Today I will surely sleep more remembering this hreat thought combined with strong fellow-feelings. It is sweet as always: -D (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (10/7/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    A meaningful goodnight song with soothing charm of its kind dear Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (10/6/2013 9:33:00 PM)

    Incredible piece of artistry, so beautiful
    a real kiss of starlight. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/6/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    Soul is enjoying in the lap of warm shelter enjoy lovely poem 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Lyn Paul (10/6/2013 4:21:00 AM)

    Hope It Shelters You Warmly. ... Beautiful words Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (10/6/2013 1:59:00 AM)

    Wow! I'm just wondering who is this U.S? Fab, Soul.Very nice and soothing and what not! Getting emotional. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,405 Points Diane Hine (10/6/2013 1:33:00 AM)

    As gentle and romantic as the touch of starlight. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,083 Points Xelam Kan (10/5/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    a bit stronger and intense in emotions this time....
    u often go for feelings and passions rather than Art...(whats fashion today)
    its not bad idea but sometimes try to verse in contemporary style...
    as for the last few weeks im deeply indulge in discussion regarding the style and purpose of modern poetry... modern vs old
    the natives tightly mark our poetry as clichéd and trite as we often treats poetic theme exotically
    you verse in highly motivated fashion, that mostly cultured in the subcontinent or may be at ur side too.
    i like it as it glides smoothly this time
    good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (10/5/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    For the very first time, i saw such short n easily interpretable poem from ur side..ha ha, just kiding..

    As i see your face painted on the moon

    Breath me out all of my warm breaths
    .....
    By the kiss of starlight...

    kiss of starlight, wao what a romantic poem u have composed, completely holdable poem.. (Report) Reply

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