By His Side Poem by Callie Carroll

By His Side



Why do I remember most
my grandfather who hardly
spoke a word to me unless

you count a chortle of delight
as he revealed his peppermint stash,
his hum while shucking corn
to show the juicy pearls,
the patient click of his tongue
as he removed my corncrib splinter.

I never dreamed I would forget
my grandmother's endless litanies
of recipes, patterns and chickens,
canning jars and sassafras root,
the proper way to turn a hem,
how a lady acts in church.

Again and again my mind
settles by his silent side the same
way I seek an empty church for prayer.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote a really terrible poem on this same topic a few years ago. I hope this one is better. I broke a 'do not' tip on a poetry writing blog: 'Do not write about your grandparents.' I hope the result is not overly sentimental or predictable.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Hill 30 December 2016

I think this poem is truly lovely. I like it very much. It captures that which is felt and that which is so hard to put into words.....but you have.....admirably Well done.......... 10*s

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V P Mahur 24 March 2014

Dear callie, Old memories of our close persons remain with us. Nice poem. Thanks! ................................. 'Love Forever' ................................. Please Reply..

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John Brown 18 March 2014

I like this. I prefer rhyming poetry best of all, but this has a nice flow to it. And no: it's not just one person reading and writing all these poems (you made me chuckle there)

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

seeking empty church, I like it. Please read my poems and comment.

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