Butterfly Feeling Poem by Alexsandra Henley

Butterfly Feeling

Rating: 5.0


I can't feel that butterflyie feeling anymore
not for u not even for happy thoughts
felt them at one point but never again
not happening now not today not tomorrow not ever
it burns deep in my heart when I say those three words
it kills
ya I have the thoughts but that's it
Not a tickle
Even though I may smile
doesnt mean I don't have worry
I know I have the feelings there
I just can't feel as much as before
My body is numb
If only people really new my world
My life: /

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success