Butterflies Poem by nick trager

Butterflies

Rating: 4.2


These colorful bugs that fly
Low in the summer sky
And flies above children in the morning’s light
That shows there colored wings
To those that see the child inside
Then fly to that meadow
Where we wish to fly with the artistic flyers of the sky
And grow our wings then fly in the summer set meadow sky
To see all my fellow flyers of the sky
And spread these new found wings in the meadows hills
Where we all with different colored wings my fly
With no doubt that these wings of mine can fly into a summer’s setting sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 06 March 2008

i like this one a lot its like a wounderful summer poem that everyone can enjoy i love it im giveing it a perfected ten =)

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great poem..................r u a nature lover? ? ? ? ?

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Broken Peaces 09 March 2008

Good subject matter and nice conception 10 C hris

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Keyra King 08 March 2008

cool i really like this but i agree with vidyadhar some line are a little too long but it is great i like the detail in this one to me really that is what it is all about detail

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Ted Sheridan 08 March 2008

Keep up the good work Nick, you have a talent for writing.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 March 2008

good one but some lines seem to be little long loosing rhythm.......

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