Sara Fielder


Buttercup


Emotions
Up and down
up and down
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Topic of this poem: life


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  • Rookie - 20 Points Leesaan Robertson (4/14/2014 7:06:00 PM)

    interesting write! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (4/14/2014 2:39:00 AM)

    emotionally strong.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (4/14/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    I understand completly just because you want to bash a persons head in and see if spaghetti doesent roll out doesent mean you dont love that person it just means that if you had to kill them you will give them the courtesy of thinking about offing them before doing it. Love is a great delusion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (4/14/2013 3:50:00 AM)

    Sara Fielder, savage I like the wild flow of the poem. It's unruly determination. It has a distinct personality. It's a being in its own self. It is mad, it is in love. Yes I can feel it throbbing. One bit I can't understand perhaps I am out of touch of the common lingo usage in your part of the world. In what context do you use the abbreviation homo? And what on earth is an OCD? Pardon my ignorance I really don't know what's an OCD, except for it to be an Over the Counter drug or an ethical preparation pharmaceutical which can be legally sold without a doctors prescription. Cheers and god bless. Liked your poem excluding the line containing those two words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Martin O'Neill (2/22/2012 6:09:00 PM)

    Oh Sarah, this is just on the nail. Marvellous capture of love/hate. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John W. McEwers (2/14/2012 3:30:00 AM)

    Truly amazing how lovely saying exactly what you mean can be. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,935 Points Ken E Hall (2/10/2012 5:54:00 AM)

    Dry humour at it's best made laugh out loud, thats what we want in this world did feel sorry for the hamster though...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points C. Cruz (2/6/2012 10:35:00 PM)

    Stair way to heaven... Up and down! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charles Darkly (2/5/2012 2:15:00 PM)

    Maybe it's the asthma I'm constantly battling, but I laughed so hard I started coughing. You've got a bit of a black humor streak for sure. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (2/4/2012 10:13:00 AM)

    Sounds like an emotional roller coaster ride.
    I've been on so many of them.
    I'd say at times it can be fun, and at other times not so much.

    Great Poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 334 Points Patti Masterman (2/3/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    Wow, I had little varmints as pets, and all these years later, I still occasionally
    dream they're still there in their cages, and I haven't fed or watered them in about
    35 years, lol..really enjoyed this, and also the reference to OCD- was the perfect touch. :) (Report) Reply



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