But I Miss You Most When You Dont Miss Me.... Poem by Ratan Bhattacharjee

But I Miss You Most When You Dont Miss Me....

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But I Miss You Most When You Don’t Miss Me….
When the sky becomes crimson red
I miss u
when the apple turns red from green in Kashmir
I miss u
When the boughs of olive tree are full of leaves
I miss u
When frosty winter blocks the door
I miss u
When the mailbox is filled with letters from others
I miss u
When I am at mess and dont find what to write
I miss u


But I miss u most
WHEN U DONT MISS ME....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

Wowwwww A superb write! ! ! ! You, miss her most I guess when the mailbox boasts with letters of posts from others And not herssssss -10 anjali

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Yamini Peethambaran 21 January 2010

well written... good work

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 January 2010

nice to be the third to comment here...

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Sumita Datta 22 January 2010

wah! wah! wah? but how do you know? that you miss her most when she doesn't miss you? I think she also misses you most and that's the reason you also miss her most... You know! It's 'TELEPATHY' :)

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Originates from deep emotion but the poem has a down to earth approach also. Conditions stated when the beloved is missed are very appropriate.Nice poem, thanks for sharing.

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Nazma Lucky 18 June 2010

When the mailbox is filled with letters from others I miss u So nice, , , , , , it's absolutely right

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Amisha Nair 08 February 2010

wow! i miss u the most when others are around n not u.....a very sweet n emotional one...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 February 2010

Very romantic. I see some Indian flavour in it.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 January 2010

When I am at mess and dont find what to write I miss u.................................................................. leaves yet miss the tree as green leaves the leaf love misses grin as grin loves in resilience, amazing write by imagery, yet of unique genre, i do enjoy,10+++, thanks for sharing

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