Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 445 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

Bury The Pain - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

I made a promise to you
But I did not fulfill it through
Please forgive me and forget my failure
Bury the pain; I will amend it in the future.

I said I will always love you
But I did not illustrated it through
Please forgive me and forget my neglect
Bury the pain; I will rectify on the subject.

I vowed my loyalty to you
But I did not not prove it through
Please forgive me and forget my pretense
Bury the pain; I will be true to recompense


Comments about Bury The Pain by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Silver Star - 3,929 Points Ken E Hall (10/10/2013 6:00:00 AM)

    to admit faults to your love must create a new light indeed original poem from the soul...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 13 Points Inas Essa (10/3/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    Beautifully written, obviously from the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (10/3/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    if someone confesses of his/her mistake, then nothing needs to be explain to gain, love n trust again :)
    good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Inner Whispers (10/3/2013 12:01:00 AM)

    ...if only every man knows how to accept his failure to his lovedone like you, there will be no hard time for the other to forgive. Nice write, Marvin. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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