Bury Me To Eternity Poem by Pink Butterfly

splendid poem..a deep thoughts with compassion...10

nice work...the poetic spirit is working...enough to be qualified to the discipline to poetry. like it...keep up the good work.

at such a small age u write so brilliantly.... i shall be waiting for more of ur poems.. :) good work.

Very good, hon. But I noticed only two poems? Write on! This was well done. I would like to see more. -Wes

excellent very dark and worrying but so well penned. Thankyou for the comment on my Dreams od Singapore, very astute observation, hidden meanings x

Bury me to eternity...it sound like fallen angel crying...You created beautiful poem, even though u decorate it with pain and put many accessories of darkness but it still make this poem as a drawing of white heart...this is good, keep writing but to bury you to eternity? this is too early, but treasure yourself save people from calamity..make this life more secure! Hopes never fade..happy always okay! .. that's good :) :)

darkly, morbidly, beautiful. thank you for sharing. :)

.....i liked this :)

well written mind opener.

Brilliantly written this poem. The poetic spirit is shown very well here. Keep coming. Great