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Unwritten Soul


Burning Goodbye


In quietness of the air
Somewhere my soul immersed within
Flowing freely touching atmosphere
Flying over the sky, low to high
In silence, listen to the sound of wind
My whisper behind the rippling leaves
Tell you here i come, as the breeze
Through the branches of the tree
Touch you softly, forever i will be

Across the lands and meet the oceans
Running to you miles in a far distance
Presence of me exist without being seen
Trust me, as the wind touch on your skin
Cool from the ocean, warm from the sun
Touch of my fingers hold you in the breeze
To dry your tears, vapor your fears
Craving best smiles upon your face
For the best to glance many days

Inhale me in everytime you breathe
Feel sultry circulation all over your body
With my wishes to rise happy in glory
As I meditate within your thick flowing blood
Touring, before reach core inside your heart
The space, where the heartbeats keep secret
Tormented, sorrow and smile for this world
I am loyal to listen, understand beats in words
So bring me inside and feel me in your breath

Sealed by the silent dreams, unspoken pains
As when the silk of darkness cover your soul
Swimming back to you from the sky high
Wash your will to fly again with the spirit found above
Win your victory, frontier of the white doves

Breathe me in breathe me out
Breathe with me, together we travel the time
Burn the barrier clear the negative clots
Riding your blood to soothe the vessels
Wheel your dark drift away with me
Hush me now with all the reasons made you cry
Above the sky it will fade away in thousands miles
If the dark dissolve in daylight, to be dark night
For always, my prayer hands paint you spirit with light
Keep hopes glittering hanging in the air upside
Forever shine, my stars company you all nights
As for you, not alone to smile and fight

Wherever you are, I still in the air
As long as you breathe, forever i live in your breath,
Burning my goodbye without fire, gone without ashes
As to you i always return, back with same wishes
Grant me your smiles, something money cant buy

Together we will pass the time
Till one moment has come
When you leave and close the door
The day when you breathe no more

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Internet connection stop me from post this yesterday..SOmething i cant control.


Perfect night in such windy one, finally my soul back in right place again
to write honestly what my heart to say...poetry of friendship for my next
rise from the ashes...This such a personal one i share, the honest feel i give
I done writing before but i threw original away It doesnt fit my soul, not on right place..
I was discovering spirit in candle, strength from rose, and now turn myself as the wind
...The air, Exist but unseen, and physiological intimately important..Choose one color in any tones
in my artcover to represent yourself, i will never discriminate any :) . This poem is how i
tell you my gratitute to many friends here, thanks for convincing me to stay In PH
and it mean a lot to wake me, to let me see back what the purpose i am here...I remember all now
I am here for people who need someone to listen, to loose the sorrow..Please to all my friend
feel free to share what in mind, we will fight the dark as big family...we born in
womb of unity, love and humanity...So i dedicate myself for each friend if you need
depend on you to believe or not..but i say it's true..At first many say, is that a goodbye
poem? ? ? NOT AT ALL..burning goodbye is to lost goodbye not to consume it :)

4th poem: Night whisperer (Dark Guardian) ...

Submitted: Wednesday, December 07, 2011

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  • Freshman - 1,219 Points Ken E Hall (9/7/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    Burning goodbye fantastic write emotion penned with aplomb unity and love thanks...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,285 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/22/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Wow. Wonderful write...Heartfelt and full of emotions.Each lines very beautifully portrayed like you O Soul..loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (8/12/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Grant me your smiles something that money can't buy. This is a good line
    and so very true. There are so many things that money can't buy. Love, health,
    peace, happiness, joy, friendship, etc.. Your write is so very passionate SOUL.
    It takes you to deep well of love to high heights of ecstasy. Well written with lots
    of details. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/9/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    making anyone speechless, is one of art of ur artistic mind...each & every words, verse stanza is too attractive.too majestic, too inspirational...awesome way to relish our heart, mind and soul....love (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,756 Points * Sunprincess * (12/24/2012 8:42:00 PM)

    oh this is so marvelous it is like a wonderful christmas gift..
    thanks unwritten soul for writing this one, it is very special..
    i love it..sending you wishes for a merry christmas and a
    happy new year with lots of love! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,080 Points Neela Nath (11/15/2012 10:53:00 AM)

    Heart-touching. You made me feel, for my friends whom I lost. So warm, yet so gentle as cool breeze.My scorching soul, now is cooling down. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 240 Points Ray Quesada (10/13/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    this is a good write, but may i ask, what language(s?) other than English do you speak? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nurain Ali-balogun (9/20/2012 1:46:00 AM)

    This is just extraordinary. It felt as though I was immersed in a pool, and the only thing I could hear were your words. Terrific effort. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Captain Cur (6/10/2012 1:45:00 PM)

    I found the best way to read your poetry is slowly, line by line, meditating on each meaning and feeling. The intro to this poem is brilliant and heartfelt. The reader needs and wants to hear more. The melody in your lines play out like a song and encircles the reader with colors and music. Wonderfully constructed piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (12/29/2011 1:09:00 AM)

    A sensational poem, every line packed with superb emotional depth. Keep doing what you do best, Unwritten, spreading your love worldwide across poem hunter, You are truly special in everything you do.
    My love to you always, your fellow messenger poet,
    Greg (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Rekha Mandagere (12/20/2011 4:03:00 AM)

    The soul presented here is universal and it will be present with someone who believes it till the last breathe. It depicts great values- loyalty and humility to lives around it.There is a wonderful picture of compassionate human soul which deeply feels for others happiness and goodness.How should I evaluate this poem. I am surely in confusion.10+++++++ infinity is ok? Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (12/19/2011 12:41:00 AM)

    The one thing that clicked to my mind as went through this write, is that indirectly you painting a picture... A true image that sincerely storms the mind and hearts of the readers, am so honored to have read this, great! Very great! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,110 Points Wahab Abdul (12/18/2011 3:15:00 PM)

    poetry from the heart, a nice person can write a nice poem, art is innocent.
    this is my great pleasure to read it out aloud
    and sir you are senior poet -please read and comment some of my poem,
    It will help (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Salema Khatun (12/18/2011 3:07:00 PM)

    what a poem SIR, nice long, it is worth the trouble Sir.please read some of my poem & rate it, your comment is very necessary & important to me sir (Report) Reply

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