Bubbles Poem by Rory Hudson

Bubbles

Rating: 5.0


(A senryu)

My child blows bubbles
and chases them while laughing
in the autumn wind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What a vivid happy picture this paints. I can imagine the colors of the bubbles and the color from the autumn leaves. Beautiful Rory! 10 Karin Anderson

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

innovative style..linked to lovely combination of short lines.. fine write..10++

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Raj Arumugam 10 June 2009

what a lovely combination of child, nature and joy...Beautiful lines, Rory

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Rory Hudson

Rory Hudson

Adelaide, Australia
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