Bubbles Poem by jerry hughes

Bubbles



See them rise, float away and gently burst.
Innocently the child blowing them didn't know
he was creating a perfect metaphor for life.

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I love this seeing that I wrote a poem for my children called 'bubbles'. Light bubbles but deep water Jerry! You're a bubble of wisdom. Karin Anderson

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Amie-Lee ...... 25 February 2008

Short, but sweet. Good work. I have to agree with my darling friend Allie.......perfect 10

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Alison Cassidy 06 December 2007

Sometimes you touch the soul of life with a feather. This is beautiful. love, Allie xxxx

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R H 02 December 2007

I love the depth of this Jerry, the transient image of the floating bubbles, the innocence of the child - and finally, the bubbles gently bursting. A delicately crafted yet deeply profound piece of poetry. Justine xx

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