Brothers Till The End Poem by Kelsea Osterman

Brothers Till The End

Rating: 4.6


Taken from me and returned to our mother Hera.
You were my brothers by blood and at heart.
And now you lay separate,
Only one is allowed to return to the heavens,
And the other forced to remain here.
Forced to be scowled at and hated.
For you met in battle in which you ended both your lives.
You both fought for what you believed was right.
Some believe it to have been a pointless battle,
But I know better.
You both had a purpose in it.
And because that purpose I believe you lived your lives just right.
You fulfilled your destiny.
And now you are to be put to bed for the last time.
I wished to give you both coins for your journey back home.
And now that you are gone you should both be laid at rest.
But I am forced to honor only one of you.
I am forced to only send one of you home.
The one who is said to die with honor.
The one who is granted a way into the heavens.
And the other is to lie and rot because of his so called treason.
But I shall not stand by.
I shall not let some law stop what is right.
I shall return both of you to Hera.
You shall both cross the river with Charon.
For you are both of my blood and both deserve to live forever.
And with this I give my promise to reunite you both.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 08 February 2012

a great poem.........

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Devils Favorite Child Blade 08 February 2012

a very excellent poem good word choice u got major talent dont ever stop writing poems

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Vipins Puthooran 08 February 2012

this's because of you've a got a pure heart/I like this poem// top marks! ! !

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Joel Sheyi 19 February 2012

~i luv ds.....gr8 work~

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Dawn Lambert 13 February 2012

a very couraging poem about love for brothers i am 14 years old and i love poems please check me out

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isabella Francis 09 February 2012

Just beautiful.. Very well written and so full of feelings... Admirable.

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Wahab Abdul 08 February 2012

what a poem it is! I like the poem very much because it is a beauty, please keep it up and keep writing and please read my poems.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 08 February 2012

well, i really have nothing to say cause it`s not just a poem... it is going without saying you are a true talent. keep it up. your poems have a harmony of words mystery and meaning, sadness and unexplained beauty... i really enjoyed reading this...thanks a lot... and i want you to read my poems. i`ll be happy if you let me know what do you think about them :)

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