Brother Of Geetha Jayakumar Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Brother Of Geetha Jayakumar

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I found my steps, wrong,
The period of astray, long,
The shadow of Satan, strong.

And I asked to my 'self',
'Am I the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets'.

My'self'was quick to answer,
Refined with the divine transfer,
And my heart and soul to refer.

'I am the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets',
And steps became right, strong and bright.

Saturday, March 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 April 2015

What a sensible and bold confession and what an amazing resilience. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 April 2015

poetry always make our mind refined- you belong to the poets family definitely

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 March 2015

Good that you found yourself Abdulrazak and now you know what you are to do on this earthly sojourn. Best of luck.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 April 2015

A Wonderful write with beautiful lines..... I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. I am not sure what I should comment on this poem. All I can tell is dear brother, Welcome to Poemhunter. Keep on writing. You poems are beautiful to read.

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Thank you sister for your compassionate words and motivation

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Well expressed in a poet family, nice writing sir.

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Kewayne Wadley 25 October 2015

Nicely done Abdulrazak! Lovely expression From beginning to end! I wish it was a bit longer lol. Great read

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2015

Marvellous expression. The favourite lines are......I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. Thanks for sharing. 10

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Ayman Parray 27 July 2015

Ameen to what Mr. C.P Sharma said True universal brotherhood of man and God watches over us all with his benevolence. The strings of love bind us all together dear Abdulrazak, a great write. I salute you for your love for your sister and a fellow poet.

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C. P. Sharma 17 July 2015

Wonderful...true brotherhood of man and fatherhood of God.

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