Broken Wings Poem by Gothic Fairy Princess

Broken Wings

Rating: 2.5


Perfect wings are meant to fly,
But my broken wings are in no condition to mend.

Theres seems to be problems I always see,
Theres a dried-up flower,
That needs its water.

A baby-bird on the ground,
A mother not around,
With no one else to help the baby,
I was there just to help.

Theres a helpless child,
In need of help,
A passing adult sees the struggle,
To get what he/she wants out of the tree.

A little old lady,
Needs some help,
To cross the street,
To see her grand-daughter,
Two blocks down from where she lives.

An accident on the freeway,
I see on the news,
Two survivors and one dead,
I just hope they werent drunk drivers.

I've in the things I've done,
That gone terribly wrong,
But I just wanted to achieve and win
I know I've done wrong,
I know I've done right,
But I hope I can change my ways.

We are all in need of help,
We are all in need of protection,
I just can't believe we live in this crazy place.

We all believe in love and hatred,
But for each other we are so different,
HE knows we are all the same.

Beautiful wings are meant to be seen,
But my broken wings have no way to be healed again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

Perfect wings are meant to fly, But my broken wings are in no condition to mend. A sad start.

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Max Corvus Tenebrus 27 February 2012

Please do not write slang, it's disgusting that way. The topic isn't bad but grammar mate!

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Emily Oldham 14 August 2009

some really nice metaphors here, i like this poem. keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Gothic Fairy Princess

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