Broken Rhythm Poem by Jonny Brackney

Broken Rhythm

Rating: 4.0


you walk
in broken rhythm
through the shadows
of a dream.
under the curtain,
through the hole
you pass into
a nightmare.
you can't stop following
that tall hooded figure
till it stands still
pointing at your
grave.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Fielder 13 February 2012

Spin chilling and to the point. Sorta Lewis Carrolish...I like it much!

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Jonny Brackney

Jonny Brackney

Louisville, Kentucky
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