victoria bonker

Rookie (10/22/94 / new york state)

broken promises


You say you dont break your promises
You lied
You promised not to hurt me
You did
You promised we could still be friends
I hope you lied
I would rather you break you promis
Than break my Fucken heart!
I promised I didn’t love you
I lied
Our relationship was based on
Broken promises
Here is a promise I will keep
I promise to never trust you again!
By victoria bonker

Submitted: Wednesday, May 05, 2010

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  • Rookie Iron Panda 23™ (6/8/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    this is sad =(
    but i likes it......i hate when promises end up broken (Report) Reply

  • Rookie mohsin amin khan (5/5/2010 12:36:00 PM)

    your promises where like the silence that kept my heart saying he can be never a lier
    but this stage makes me to cry on these slopes rolling with my robbed heart to the secluded world (Report) Reply

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