Broken Pomise Poem by Rubab Atwal

Broken Pomise



Promise that meant forever
A face that squirrelled eternity
An echoing silence that would sever
The strings tied in our destiny

A melody that is off the key
Words that assured immortality
And you that had wrecked the perfect we
Whose pieces lie in dark levity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2018

A melody that is off the key, yes, but your style is the key of your poem's melody. A lovely poem. Aniruddha Pathak

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 January 2016

The string tied in our destiny.....an amazing sharing...thanks... :)

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Terry Craddock 23 January 2016

'Promise that meant forever A face that squirrelled eternity An echoing silence that would sever The strings tied in our destiny' powerful, read this several times :)

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