Rick Adriolo

Rookie - 187 Points (22-01-1988 / The Netherlands (Holland))

Broken Heart.. - Poem by Rick Adriolo

You have doubtful thoughts about where you belong,
Have you really mistrusted your heart for too long?
You gave me back the heart you once stole,
But as I looked closer it’s broken and therefore not whole..

And as you left me a puzzled mind and a puzzled heart,
I now give you a piece from this heart that’s broken apart.
And if you have faith in the feelings from your heart,
Then see this as the beginning of a new start..

I will do anything to see this part of my heart returned to me,
For my world is yours and I hope you see.
There is nothing I wouldn’t do,
I'm just a helpless fool for you..


Comments about Broken Heart.. by Rick Adriolo

  • Rookie - 126 Points Elias Uddin (2/13/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    There is nothing I wouldn’t do,
    I'm just a helpless fool for you.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (1/4/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    .....I believe you should send her some flowers, chocolates and a diamond ring, too... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 4, 2014


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