Broken Heart Poem by Tiffany Wolf

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


He ripped my heart in two halves,
No more kisses, hugs or laughs.
My heart was one, now it's two,
This poem is real, and 100% true.
I loved him with all my heart,
But to get involved wasn't very smart.
He was funny, sweet and nice,
Now my heart has paid the ultimate price.
Tears fell down my cheeks like rain,
Every tear reminds me of this harsh pain.
I can't stand to see him anymore,
I wish I'd go blind so I don't have to see this guy I adore.
His smiles, laughs and dimples,
Our relationship is now complicated, no longer simple.
You were the one who said, 'we're through, '
Why you said that, I haven't got a clue.
Now we're friends and we're okay,
I wish you were with me, I wish you would've stayed.
I miss absolutely everything about you,
Especially, the phone calls that lasted 'til two.
Now this sad song is ending,
It's too bad my heart still needs time for mending.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Inner Whispers 27 January 2009

hmn...this is what I feel right now, tiffany...nice descrption of a bleeding heart! 10

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~ Jon London ~ 08 February 2009

Never a true'r word spoken, very true where our hearts are concerned, we taste the fruits of love just some leave a bitterness in our mouths afterwards, great poem, from such a fine young writer. Well done. Jon

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Aleksandra Lachut 07 February 2009

That is so true that love hurts and i am only loved by one person.

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Ency Bearis 07 February 2009

love really hurts and ripped off your heart absolutely when its not right for you...good write... nice verses...10

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Denvor Fernandez 06 February 2009

Love hurts

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Eyan Desir 31 January 2009

I love this poem, , it was made so simple easy, to read, you just get the picture, of the event.. beautiful

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