Liz Gellur

(December 25 1997 / England)

Broken Friendship


One talk
Turned into shouting
We can't agree
On one thing

I wanted to repair it
But now I know
Theres no point of everything
Because our friendship is now very low

I wanted to know if our friendship really mattered
Then I saw you all walk into different direction
Then I saw our friendship
Suddenly shatter into zillions

All I wanted to do is to repair it
But now i know
None of you really want it

I guess our friendship
Can't really last forever
There's no such thing as
'It really matters'

Submitted: Saturday, December 15, 2007
Edited: Saturday, April 30, 2011

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  • Jo Matibag (2/21/2008 1:50:00 AM)

    it relly fits me, , .. my friends and i are now enemies
    try reading my poems, ....
    most of them are about broken friendship (Report) Reply

  • Mary G (2/17/2008 9:24:00 PM)

    i like your poembut i also have a quote for you about friend ship
    'You cannot say you've lost a friendship. If a friendship is capable of ending, it is because it never existed.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Malini Kadir (12/17/2007 10:34:00 AM)

    NIce read Liezelle......nice friends are also human and perhaps hurt more as theyexpect more of you......have higher hopes...
    Time heals all wounds....Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Thad Wilk (12/15/2007 5:38:00 PM)

    Nice write Liezelle! A real friend will not walk out, they stay through thick and thin!
    best regards: Thad *10*! ! (Report) Reply

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