Broken Friendship Poem by Liz Gellur

Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0


One talk
Turned into shouting
We can't agree
On one thing

I wanted to repair it
But now I know
Theres no point of everything
Because our friendship is now very low

I wanted to know if our friendship really mattered
Then I saw you all walk into different direction
Then I saw our friendship
Suddenly shatter into zillions

All I wanted to do is to repair it
But now i know
None of you really want it

I guess our friendship
Can't really last forever
There's no such thing as
'It really matters'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 15 December 2007

Nice write Liezelle! A real friend will not walk out, they stay through thick and thin! best regards: Thad *10*! !

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Malini Kadir 17 December 2007

NIce read Liezelle......nice friends are also human and perhaps hurt more as theyexpect more of you......have higher hopes... Time heals all wounds....Cheers!

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Rinalyn Bonajos 01 December 2017

I guess our friendship Can't really last forever There's no such thing as 'It really matters' But Friendship for me matter... I like your poem! Keep it up!

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Mackie Figueroa 14 December 2009

yeah, Right! friendship appears when they need you and if not, they won't. what a mess! : -(

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Jo Matibag 21 February 2008

it relly fits me, , .. my friends and i are now enemies try reading my poems, .... most of them are about broken friendship

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Mary G 17 February 2008

i like your poembut i also have a quote for you about friend ship 'You cannot say you've lost a friendship. If a friendship is capable of ending, it is because it never existed.'

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Hoda Eldeeb 18 December 2007

its true no one relly cares but thats life and thats that

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