Broken Dreams... Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

Broken Dreams...

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You thought you had it all,
back then your happiness assured,
you gave him all you had,
and pain was your reward...

A broken dream of loving true,
a promise he can't keep,
you show the world a happy face,
then cry yourself to sleep...

You say you wish you knew a way,
to bring him back again,
and as i lay here i wish that,
i could take away your pain...

When someone who is as sweet as you,
recieves a broken heart,
it doesn't simply hurt their pride,
it tares your world apart...

please try and learn from what i've said,
how love can simply end,
and better still that broken hearts,
with time and friends can mend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Mills 29 October 2007

dear poet....i too have similiar feelings like you have scripted here.....my writes are very similiar...i can totally relate to your hurt....thnx for sharing a tad bit of your heart! ! a truly amazing write! ! ! keep in touch! ! brian~

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Amber Millar 03 July 2008

Wow, this is amazing.

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Raptured Soul 30 April 2008

This poem hit so close to home. It's amazing. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Dislocated Heart 19 March 2008

this is a really good piece of poetry.. great job! and yes.. with time.. a broken heart can heal..

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

I've had that heppen to... I can relate to how that feels...

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aww...it sounds like you were talking about me in that poem..seriously...

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