Broken Poem by princy prince

Broken

Rating: 4.3


I promise myself
that, i will never fall in love
but you stole my heart and ran away.

my heart is right now empty
all your love is gone
its like i never know you
everything is in the way it was.

You said that you would
love me
you never really did
my heart is right now broken
your the real reason that i am dying.

I still remember
the days we used to spend
it was a long lasting winter
when you said this was the end
but now i have changed
the world tells me so
not because of who you are
but because of who
i am......

Friday, July 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is dedicated to my sad broken heart. I wrote this when i was 10 years old.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2015

but now i have changed the world tells me so not because of who you are but because of who i am..... yes this is a journey from the brokenness to life. well written. thankyou

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Jewel Queen 04 September 2015

sad poem but really touching words... good work! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 13 August 2015

love and pain / a good poem! !

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Allotey Abossey 31 July 2015

Love's a beautiful thing but we wouldn't let that which was not and would not kill us. There is always better days ahead. Good work friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2015

You stole my heart and ran away! ! With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Princy Prince 01 August 2015

your welcome

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