Broken Poem by Kaitlyn Garlick

Broken



Broken-inside; In a million pieces
Crying out rivers
Cutting away the pain
To hurt to care anymore
Faking-outside perfect as ever
Smiles forced
Laughs fake as can be
All for the benefit of others
Fading-till there's nothing left
All because the pain you never noticed
Nothing left but scars and pain
Fading till there's nothing left but pain
Broken, Faking, and Fading-is all I am...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem because I had my heart broken and couldn't take the emotional pain so I started to cut and soon became suicidal...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucifera Santez 01 December 2013

girl you have talent with words. and there is no shame in being not able to cope with pain. i cant say i understand your pain, but i had my heart broken pretty badly too, so think i can relate. but as for being suicidal, my brother would have killed me, i am all he has, he is all i have. so there is no shame in saying you cant cope with pain. as for poem goes its a gem. a 10 from me. :)

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Kaitlyn Garlick

Kaitlyn Garlick

Level-land, Texas
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