'Broken' Poem by Sujay Patekar

'Broken'



Its been ages since I genuinely smiled,

as only miseries on me have piled.

I regret all that I had once chosen,

... For which, today I am so broken....



Wrong decisions, wrong relations & wrong company to keep;

with all these blunders I remorsefully weep.

Every bit of my hope is badly shaken,

For which, today I am so broken....



In the lure of thirst, I was brutally drowned,

With the title of 'Stupid Jerk', I was royally crowned.

Ruthlessly, by fate every toll has been taken,

For which, today I am so broken....



In the guise of a butterfly, a scorpion stung me.

Getting better everytime, my dear ones pierced me.

With every wound & bruise, from my dream I was awaken,

For which, today I am so broken....



~Sujay Patekar..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 06 March 2012

THE SUFFERING OF THE PROTAGONIST HAS BEEN PORTRAYED HERE VERY VIVIDLY, I LIKE..THE POEM AND GIVING 100/100.

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Sajna Kailas 18 January 2012

an honest confession! Dont worry about the past, look at the bright future with hopes and dreams! well written poem. loved it.keep it up! God Bless You! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 07 November 2011

Like it good poem. A good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Running wolf.

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