Treasure Island

Sujay Patekar


'Broken'


Its been ages since I genuinely smiled,

as only miseries on me have piled.

I regret all that I had once chosen,

... For which, today I am so broken....



Wrong decisions, wrong relations & wrong company to keep;

with all these blunders I remorsefully weep.

Every bit of my hope is badly shaken,

For which, today I am so broken....



In the lure of thirst, I was brutally drowned,

With the title of 'Stupid Jerk', I was royally crowned.

Ruthlessly, by fate every toll has been taken,

For which, today I am so broken....



In the guise of a butterfly, a scorpion stung me.

Getting better everytime, my dear ones pierced me.

With every wound & bruise, from my dream I was awaken,

For which, today I am so broken....



~Sujay Patekar..

Submitted: Monday, November 07, 2011

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  • Wahab Abdul (3/6/2012 7:00:00 PM)

    THE SUFFERING OF THE PROTAGONIST HAS BEEN PORTRAYED HERE VERY VIVIDLY, I LIKE..THE POEM AND GIVING 100/100. (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (1/18/2012 3:28:00 AM)

    an honest confession! Dont worry about the past, look at the bright future with hopes and dreams! well written poem.
    loved it.keep it up!
    God Bless You! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (11/7/2011 1:57:00 AM)

    Like it good poem. A good write.
    May i invite you to read my poem called,
    Running wolf. (Report) Reply

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