Broken Poem by AURORA BANNECKJ

Broken

Rating: 3.0


Y did I fall for the stupid mind game
I should of known a guy like u would never be tamed
I gave u all I had and u tore it apart
I don't know y I think its my fault
I was so stupid to trust in u
I hate the thought of letting u go
I hate seeing u with her
I hate so many thing in this life
and u just made it worse
y did I have to catch on to every word
I had way to much faith in u
I gave up a lot
but all u seem to is want to fight
even if I tried to make it a special night
I said I wouldn't call especially after u lost all control
but believe me I really need u now
does what we still could of been cross ur mind
or did u never really care at all
I fell in love with someone u pretended to be
I wish you felt how much pain there is in me
I cant stop wondering y u told me I was better than her
then hurt me to date her
it makes no sense but I got to give up
I guess love don't want to be here
I tired to keep u pleased but it was never enough
I don't knowhow ill go on with out your love

goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kieran J96 21 May 2010

great poem, i really like it.

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Aastha Uppal 05 May 2010

surely being betrayed by the one you love and trust hurts but always remember there's only one special person in this world in whom you should always keep your faith and that person's you. remember no one in your life is more important than your own self... if you are with you then you can capture the entire world.. live it for yourself.. great and honest flow of emotions... nice work

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