Broken Poem by Silence Dogood

Broken

Rating: 5.0


Smiles dont last forever
Sometimes they fade to grey.
Its hard to keep it together.
When your leaving me this way.
How can I breathe with no air.
Its so hard not to die.
When your not ever there.
Do I hear the reply.
My voice echoes off the walls.
In this empty room.
I sit by the phone waiting for your call.
Can I please hear it soon.
I cant keep this smile on my face.
Its been to long your to late.
Not enough sorrys to many mistakes.
Not enough time to waste.
Too long too late I hear the reply.
Telling me another lie.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Existential Despair 11 September 2008

i walked in snickering ready look at work that needed polishing, my jaw hit the ground...what a great poem!

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I can relate with you on this one! You have got SO much talent sweetheart! I loved reading this one because I related with it a whole lot. I also learned that not all guys do that to you. You just have to find the guy that doesn't do that, and calls everymorning just to say 'Goodmorning' and again in the evening to say 'Goodnight' and sometimes even randomly in the day just to say 'I love you.' Don't worry about finding him anytime soon. You have your whole life ahead of you...so do I but still. =) Keep writing! These are awesome! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Monkey Mendez 03 September 2008

Guys. They never care about peoples' feelings. This is a great poem. Nice job!

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