**broken** Poem by MZ.PLIES 4lyfe

**broken**

Rating: 2.8


BROKEN
BROKEN INTO A MILLION PIECES
LOOK UP UPON THE SKY & WHAT DO I SEE?
I SEE A VESION IN MY MIND OF YOU & ME.

BROKEN
BROKEN BROKEN INTO A MILLION PIECES
I GAVE YOU MY HEART & WHAT DO I GET IN RETURN
A BROKEN HEART, A STABBED BACK, & 2 EYES FULL OF TWICE THE NORMAL AMOUNT OF TEARS.

BROKEN
BROKEN BROKEN INTO A MILLION PIECES
SOON YOU WILL GET THE ITS THE LIKE THE MOON AND IT WILL
SHINE AGAIN LIKE THE SUN.

BROKEN
BROKEN BROKEN INTO A MILLION PIECES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

I'd like to know something about the word (its) in the third verse. I gave it an 8. I recommend it. GW62

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angelianne 1012 09 June 2008

simple but with strong feelings..thanks for sharing! ! !

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