Broken (11/2/09) Poem by Kayleigh ....

Broken (11/2/09)

Rating: 4.3


She does this
He says that
Tension builds in both wounded hearts
Someone yells
And doors get slammed
They'll sleep in separate rooms tonight
Morning comes
But no one speaks
The silence chills the air
Now both will leave
No goodbyes
No have a good day
Tires screech angrily to the street
He comes home
She's not there
The house is dark and empty
Her things are gone
He tries to call
But she won't talk
Once wounded hearts have cracked completely
Nothing remains of this broken love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 03 November 2009

So true it happens all the time - simple but effective well done

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Danny H 02 November 2009

Very nice poem! . Bravo

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Gwendalynn Ash 02 November 2009

aww...so sad...i unfortuantly am witnessing just this...great poem though

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