Broad Day Light Poem by ramesh rai

Broad Day Light

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Broad day light had never been so
when i could realise fathom of my soul
my mind asks me, where thou art going
to an endless path, that will never meet
the horizone, how long you passed the way
the distance between you and horizone
will make a perpendicular to the sky
sums to 360 degree encircling the life.

Sunday, June 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 June 2014

Nice Idea. The shortest distance is the perprndicular distance.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 June 2014

Life defined precisely by geometry beautifully. Thank you.

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Christian Hudak 02 June 2014

Wow, very good poem, congratulation. I invite you to go through my poems for you

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Suman Kumar Das 01 June 2014

A wonderful write having deep thought.................superb, Sir.

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