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divine Wishes of love avow deep in heart
light by life in unison to wrest sorrow
soul needs to respire on furrows of pain
spumes of white when floats to brim of blue

blood needs strength on rungs ofred
lily on pond bespeaks ofbeauty on its head
root when anchored into paragon ofendearment
lest bliss be not shaken in dungeon of darkness

alacrity engrosses upon swayng onto finale
dew when feels spark by rise of sun on east
warmth slowly reels through gloss of kiss
I do remember rain slowly falling from clouds

lo behold! sparking dew redeems on rune oftruth
yet blushes of grin spreads up its wing dappled
grass may feel greener by rain dazzling
eternity may adore on shore of mortality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cat Hodgson 24 April 2014

I remember it seems like yesterday Reading poetry on the internet I came upon the most extraordinary work Poetry that hooked the mind to think Deep with metaphor that challenged The depth of work projected a genius mind I found it belonged to Doctor Subhendu Kar His work is sure to be a classic now and in years to come.. Snuggle down with a blanket in your favorite place Let him whisper as only he does through his poetry.. Commentary from Just another poet, Cat

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Linda Winchell 15 October 2010

How sweet are these words my friend. God bless

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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