Brick Wall Poem by Carl Harrison

Brick Wall

Rating: 4.8


Brick wall brick wall
where are you now

I'm feeling the pain
and I need you now

I'm opening up like never
before

Or maybe it's just
I don't need you no more

The tension is going
the pain is still there

Maybe it's a God send
so stay over there

I'm feeling the benefit
of you not been there

Or maybe it was
my mind that decided
to put you there

Bye bye brick wall

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes the protection of a brick wall has to come down.
You just don't know it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 27 October 2013

nice thoughts about the brick wall. It shuts us away from other people.

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