Bri's Solution...[inspired By Lora Colon's ' When A Man Cries '; Loving Your Man; Fantasy! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri's Solution...[inspired By Lora Colon's ' When A Man Cries '; Loving Your Man; Fantasy! ]



If your man is down in the dumps,
his nails bitten to bloody stumps,
give him a smile a hug and a kiss,
and a mug of beer; a beer can't miss!

Or if he's already a member of AA,
better skip the beer, but soda's OK.
Don't forget the ham sandwich, oh no!
And get it all quickly; don't ever be slow! !

Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: men
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it's there for the reading. be kind to your man! be kind to any man (or woman) . :) bri

of course i DID write 'fantasy'!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 23 June 2018

AND HERE is my reponse to Rose Marie's comment (see my comment left below on 6-22) . Rose Marie, GEE! I did't MEAN to do..............ALL 'THAT'! ! ! ! bri) i used my brilliant pen! i have a PH poem entitled History Of The Pen ….. [history Of Writing Instrument(S) And Ink Semi-True Almost Long] submitted: 2/17/2016 it's Almost Long, but you are welcome to read it. :)

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2018

AND HERE is my 'response' to Perdita's comment (see my comment left on 6-22) . 1 - Perdita, OR mere! Give me ice cream. Pizza, too, is quite OK. At my age [losing 'steam'], ain't easy that's all I'll say! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 June 2018

here are two comments left at a now-deleted-but-basically-identical poem from me: : 1 - Perdita Young (6/16/2018 8: 09: 00 AM) Good advice to all those in a relationship...Food and drinks can surely be a good cure, sometimes more effective than mere words. (Report) 2 - Rose Marie Juan-austin (6/6/2018 11: 09: 00 PM) A very thoughtful poem. A nice advice with a tinge of humor. Enjoyed reading it.10 (Report)

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Wes Vogler 22 November 2015

I shall put this on my fridge. Thank you for the beers to come (Labatt Blue..5 percent) a 10

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