Breeze Poem by Valsa George

Breeze

Rating: 5.0


The whispered
Sweet nothings of love
In Nature's ear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 16 July 2012

A powerful poem offering the strong to the heart insights! Wonderful in it's little creation.Immense in it's conception.Inm a class of it's own when we bow down to thank the brillian-your beautiful mind that created it.Thanks

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 September 2014

Very insightful indeed.....Valsa.....a lot in a few words....breeze whispering in Nature's ear...what a beauty....

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Akhtar Jawad 02 August 2015

A nice three liner..............................................

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Small lines, big inspiration, thanks for sharing mam

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Mj Lemon 07 April 2020

The breeze as breath! This is brilliant, Valsa. I have noticed that, when in private, a resort to a breathy whisper is invariably made to deliver 'sweet', good news. This goes straight to myfavourites.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2019

Title of the poem is appropriated. Love...bridge...whispered...Nature's ear...these words are composing a sweet, lovely and meaningful poem. Thanks for you unique style of three liners.

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Hazel Durham 10 July 2019

Beautiful title and nature is freedom of our souls in the wildness of a storm, freedom of our hearts in the tranquil stillness of a lake bathed in sunlight. Beautiful write Valsa!

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Simone Inez Harriman 28 February 2016

Three little lines that deliver such beautiful images. You describe the gentle feathery light breeze whispering in natures ear perfectly....just love this little gem...10+++ and added to my favorites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2016

With the muse of life and, the ways of love. Nice work.

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