Breeze Poem by Char Pattrick

Breeze

Rating: 5.0


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With the leaves all beautiful colours, all arrays

Hues of amber, yellow, orange and greys

The breeze gently bristling them on the tree

They fall to the ground as if they were free

Smelling fresh after the last remnant of this day

As sure as days come the light must end today

Bringing with it new hopes dreams

No nightmares, hopefully no screams

Pausing to take a breath of air

Looking into the dark, I stare

With all the day behind me

Softly slumbering to the sounds of the waves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2009

As sure as days come the light must end today Bringing with it new hopes dreams No nightmares, hopefully no screams Pausing to take a breath of air................................with new hopes of life..........colll breeze may disappear with arrival of sun shine bringing happuiness in life.... good imagination dear.. i loved it...10 red mine cool breeze.....sun.......you go alone...yes yes yes

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