Breeze Poem by Deepta Protik Osman

Breeze

Rating: 5.0


I wandered at the sands
As I am in a desert,
Few men were there
And night shined
All around the sky,
The cool breeze
Touched my body
As I walked
Like a ghost for a host,
Breezes and breezes
Cools me on
On and on
In the night’s time,
Breezes cools me
On and on
As I wandered and wandered
Like ghost for a host.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kafil Uddin Raihan 18 July 2009

Well expressed, cheers with 10+++++++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 July 2009

finely penned..................breeze sweet! ......10+

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