Breathing Dust Poem by Satish Verma

Breathing Dust

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Do not stoke the desires tonight,
my moon is away on the cusp of doubts.
Count you must the needles in heart, of
ifs and buts? A fragile truce was anathema
to me. The nagging day lies ahead –

of my failing gifts. Living was a whispering
silence, no secrets had a spite for you.
A fine drizzle of thoughts fills the lungs,
mind cries for the space to arrange
the corpses of dreams.

The uncertainties take a heavy toll.
A new voice precedes a wet moon,
the sun was rising late today, living apart.


SATISH VERMA

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

nice rational poem, well expressed............

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Joseph Poewhit 09 October 2009

Words have depth of floating feelings

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Callie Carroll 09 October 2009

What fine words! I have felt the cusp of doubts and had not the words to tell it. The 'whispering of silence', truly haunting. Respect to you, Cal

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