Breath Poem by Deborah Cromer
Breath
Only through existence and with passing of time
All thoughts and feelings join together to form rhyme
Forward, going straight, moving up towards light
Color and grace, peace in life, always so right
Slipping away, leaving only to secure yourself tighter
The will of strength confirms the survival of the fighter
Sunlight awakens each day to ensure a world of trust
Wrapping my love comfortably around wholeness of divine lust
its hard to derive the concept of the poem which must have been in the poets mind at the time of writing it, and thats the beauty of it. A 10.
wonderful abstract poem, thank you for sharing..............10++++
the will of strength, confirms the survival, of the fighter. this is the hammer that stuck the nail. B. U. T. FULL
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 1:36:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Use of proper punctuation, particularly commas, makes the poem easy to read. Yet one would struggle to comprehend the meaning. Loved the last two lines more than the rest. Did you read my comment on your first poem, the one posted earlier to this one?