Breaking Point Blank Poem by Kaitey Cat

Breaking Point Blank



Anger rushes through me, like a flood, like a storm
LiKe A bReAkInG DaM
Flowing,
I'm undergoing to its force
Flooding,
Past budding, it's a full flower
Moving,
Proving all my unknown
Beating,
Defeating my last soldier,
Cursing,
Reversinf happeir times
Breaking,
Staking it's claim
Bending,
Unending in it's wake
Supernatural
And at the same time
Perfectly Natural

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Raubenheimer 25 August 2008

Good use of rhyme and concrete imagery in a poem strongly felt.

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Joseph Poewhit 20 August 2008

Felt up in the air reading

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