Breaking Point Poem by arianna loshnowsky
Breaking Point
I'm standing on the edge
toes hanging over the ledge
I'm wondering where the breaking point is
I'm standing on the edge thinking and eating some Ritz
I'm wondering where is the best place to jump
then I thought maybe I could just dump
my bag of Ritz over the side
and see which of them died
I'm standing at the edge of ths place
tears streaming down my face
I just lost my bag of Ritz
I love it! lol Just putting the word Ritz in there turns the whole mood around.
This poem is a masterpeice. It tells me How life is such a good thing and how good of an idea it is to just hang on instead of let it all go.(if your deppressed and wanna you kno...JUMP) Lol. but anyways nice job <3
I LOVE this! ! once again you floored me.. i love your style and i read your bio and we seem alot alike: D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 7:48:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
i love most of her poems but she doesnt suit funny ones! ! !