Breaking An Angels Heart Poem by Angel Fury

Breaking An Angels Heart



Whenever you break an angels heart,
It bleeds with dark red blood,
Whenever you lie or cheat or steal,
Heaven is usually a flood.

When you break an Angels heart,
They don't just bleed dry,
They lose their hopes, dreams, and wings,
And fall down from the sky.

The angel falls down very far,
Goes through the ground and all,
Until they end up in a fiery place,
Were no hopes or dreams can call.

The angel tries to break free,
Of satin's horrible grasp,
Satin reaches for the angel's throat,
He got ahold as she gaspes.

The angel is now trapped in hell,
And you now feel apart,
Because whenever you lie, cheat or steal,
You break your angels heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunset moonshine 09 February 2009

fantastic...bravo...

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Keith Hendrickson 05 January 2009

another great piece. cant wait to look at more of your work.

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Anita Blake 27 November 2008

awesome write, i really enjoyed reading. you are a great writer keep it up :)

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Nikki Clevenger 19 November 2008

I really liked this poem. I kind of imagine it being kind of mystical in a way.

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Billy Joe Collins 18 November 2008

breaking an angels heart is sad but lifting the angel back is great what a great poem if people would look at it that way they just might think before they lie steal or cheat thanks for sharing

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