Break Up Poem by Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour

Break Up

Rating: 5.0


I gave you all I have
What do I have?
My heart, a virgin heart
The only thing I can give
I thought you said
You will let it grow
In the rich soil of your heart
I thought you said
You will forever love me
Where did I go wrong?
Where did I fault you?
Can you look at me and
Say you are leaving?
You answer was am leaving
Don't search for me
Yes I won't, I won't
But remember you broke
A virgin heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oduro Bright Amoh 22 April 2015

This poem does seem like it came straight out of the virgin heart that was broken. Great work

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Hunter Hunters 05 August 2016

oduro, I appreciate your comment, thanks a lot.

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Kelvin Owusu 09 September 2012

this is nice very well written

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Eindaray Kyaw 26 August 2012

A great strike.....A usual problem of the ones who tastes love, you are good at your job.Thank you!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2012

Writing poetry with the experiences of one's life touches many hearts. Thanks for sharing this one with us. A nice piece of work; but, THERE ARE HEART BREAKERS EVERYWHERE. E.K.L.

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