Break N' Make Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

Break N' Make

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BREAK N' MAKE
esspeecee …28.06.09.

Know to break
Remake a make.

Bonding not to make
Be in affair with break.

Breaking is melodious
As billows are
Tiny broken mercury balls
Glittery, dance and bounce.

Making is humdrum
A clichéd pursuit of
An obsessive fat husband
Of multiparous woman.

Braking has a meter
Like effortless rhyming
Fiancées’ poetic bracing
Not for lettered uncivilized.

Breaking is not
Unplanned whimsical
Unwanted pregnancy;
Just union of stupid flesh
By lettered civilized.

Sculpt thro’ breaking own mind
With creative flair
Why keep the old, stale make?
Seek joy in every break.

Thro’ braking
All civilization saw
Dawn and are hallowed,
Gives hope for jilted
Lovers to start anew.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'Thro’ braking All civilization saw Dawn and are hallowed, Gives hope for jilted Lovers to start anew.' Excellent poem with beautiful idea.

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Luwi Habte 05 July 2009

well, this is nice poem well done poet nice and fine to read luwi

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Seema Chowdhury 09 December 2009

your closing lines are wonderful. nice message in your poem. thanks for sharing.

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Photode Photode 28 October 2009

‘Making is humdrum // A clichéd pursuit of // An obsessive fat husband // Of multiparous woman.’ Oblique message for uncontrolled fertilization especially for 3rd world. Excellent poem. PO PO

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beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovely writing..

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beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovely writing..

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beautiful presentation for interesting topic...lovley writing..

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