Brave Knight Poem by rosalinda flores martinez

Brave Knight

Rating: 5.0


Shimmering white angel
dust and honey
flow on me

like a shower of lilac
in the fragrant dawn
and cool mist

while waiting for you.

The beauty is remembering
our existance. You have
come to me one by one

as brave knights,
gleaming swords of
clasping hands untainted.

Your habit defies
dirt and stinking corpses
and loathing days and

nights. It glories in the
pouring of rain and the blood
of a dutiful battlefield,

The brave knight is
You
Kneeling for peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 13 September 2009

I like every line of this piece but the ending is admirable. I'm impress dear lady. The brave knight is proud of you. Take care...

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Catrina Heart 26 July 2009

WOW! ! ! Awesome...great and powerful words with fantastic imagery...10

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Keshav Prasad 07 June 2009

nice write

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''Gleaming swords of clasping hands'' a wonderful visual metaphor.....well written...10++

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