Brand New.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Brand New....

Rating: 5.0


just another important message,
I just want to submit,
but the message has soonest gone,
it is an error!
That's it!

how annoying is this error
now my brand-new poem has gone again to "terror"....

Saturday, May 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: verse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2020

New brand is new brand as this ever attracts attention. New poems are attractive and nice and poets and visitor love to read.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 May 2020

A well composed verse. Simply excellent.....10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

New brand and new message motivate mind and readers are eager to read new poems. You have wonderful mind to pen interesting poems.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

Due to error message goes away soonest and we feel the true essence of light of perception. Due to error we become worried but after waiting with patience any technical error goes away. Sometimes errors need to be rectified. But finally the message is posted and a nice poem is interestingly drafted. Thank you very much for sharing this amazing poem with us...10

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Tulsi Shrestha 23 May 2020

Amazing style of presentation, l like it

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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