Jesus James Llorico


Branch (haiku)


The withered branches
Broken rhythms of my heart
Does she cares to know?

Submitted: Monday, March 18, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 17, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Branch (haiku) by Jesus James Llorico )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/12/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Pensive thoughts well expressed through this haiku! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (10/10/2013 4:16:00 AM)

    Beautiful read and as I am keen to write haikus, I loved reading this! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,724 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    I adore haikus. they look so simple but they are difficult to write. So few words are used it takes a skilled poet. nice work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zubiya Surti (3/31/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    sir, I have heard Haikus though small leave a tremendous impact, so does yours.I too want to learn to express my thoughts in haikus. So sir kindly keep writing more haikus so that i can reflect. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,013 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/18/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Love, pure. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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