Brainwashed Poem by Vonda Overlie

Brainwashed

Rating: 5.0


I pledge allegiance to my abuser, with incredible terror he reigns.
Holding me captive by hearts emotions, not responsible for my pain.

Beat me, cheat me, utterly defeat me, I will worship at your feet.
Singing your praises, with utter devotion, with you my life complete.

Battered and Broken, used as a token for your guilty use.
Me the quiet, timid mime, your perect distorted muse.

I pledge allegiance to my abuser, will I forever sing your praise?
Or one day be set completely free, only I can make that change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 06 September 2012

You said it well. Now throw away the hate so it will not be a part of you. Then, write poems about other subjects: trees, the wind, a kitten, anything but love. Read mine - Night Shift - Adeline

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Liebling Jacobsen 10 October 2008

beautiful poem, the words flow together ellequintly. just wanting to know if everything is ok? Your a wonderfull full of life person and i hope to work with you soon again.

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Straight 2 The Point 09 October 2008

I love your poem. I wrote a poem on brainwashing as well although it is not on this site...anyhow, nice write.

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