Br@ve He@rt$ Poem by tanvi damle

Br@ve He@rt$

Rating: 3.8


This is for my people who just lost somebody,
their best friend, their baby, man or their lady,
put your heads real high,
we will never say bye.
The terrorist not only did the innocent kill,
but also dampened our spirits & weakened our will.
They went around slaughtering people mercilessly,
putting an end to humanity.
There were pleas for help & cries of fear,
as our country was covered by the reign of terror.
As we searched frantically with our tired eyes,
wishing our loved one survives.
We are nothing without them we realize,
as we hope & pray for them to come out alive.
In our beds silently we sat & a tribute paid,
to the soldiers and the innocent who were shot dead.
As the brave hearts continue to our country defend,
as they try their best to bring this bloodshed to an end.
Our hearts are filled with hurt & despair,
as we see blood and bodies everywhere.
We all feel so sad and all alone,
as we sit & the loss of our loved one's mourn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 04 December 2008

I join you in your prayer and salutation to those bravehearts who lost their lives in Mumbai.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 04 December 2008

a beautiful poem on a very sad and traumatic event. Great write, these soldiers will be in our hearts forever and in our prayers

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Sebastine Humaemo 04 December 2008

yu penned the tragic incdnt n a great way...its really sad, some still didn understand killin othrs sure wont make their dreams come true...wll pray togethr so tht it never happns again not only n india...it should be stoped allovr cos we all one and the same.... ..thanks for sharing

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 04 December 2008

yeah this is the sad thing of any type of battles......you have described the pains very well dear..thanks 10of ten

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Ellie Sutton 05 December 2008

wouldn't it be great if we could just say, right, this has to stop. and they'd listen. thatnks for sharing, this is great x

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Jenel Shain 26 January 2010

wow, nice, just ur not suppose to take out lyrics of a song, unless u get the permission from the singer. But it is really touching, and good.

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g black black 25 January 2010

nice tanvi, , at first i thought that it was marria carey bye song and then i keeped reading i was like oh thats not it good job

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

not an easy subject but beautifully taken on by tanvi

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Adeline Foster 21 January 2010

Tanvi: Very good, it expresses the sorrow of all of us for those who lose their lives in disasters around the world. So many are mourning their loved ones. Adeline

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Aira Olayvar 19 January 2010

The mood of the poem is very strong… since it talks about the mourns and the sorrows of those who has been affected with this certain scenarios of life.

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