Bow Down Poem by persian khushi

Bow Down

Rating: 5.0


Bow down to your divine gift
For you are but a man
She is your queen
Be a real man
You created of dust
She of your rib
Near your heart
Treat her with utmost love and respect

Care for her
Purity and Perfection
You took her from her parent's home
Treat with pride your queen
Bow down imbecile
Touch her feet
And keep the divine promise you made

Simple rules to follow
Be righteous with her
Be protective of her
Be husband, lover and friend
Clothe her as she clothe you
Appreciate her affections
Adorn her with prayers you have for yourself.

Persiankushi(RM) -27/06/12

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We have seen much ill treatment of women in the diverse cultures we live in. How women are abused and reduced to nothing after marriage.
Mankind bow down to no one but God... Here 'Bow Down' is used in the context of Respect. For without respect no relationship will be a happy one.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Epic! -yeah yeah...bow down--i did like this line very much -Clothe her as she clothe you--unique

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Sanjay Mehta 08 September 2012

Yes SHE has been made an commodity.........but they who have done so do not realise the powers of this beauty. Introspection is the need of the hour for the powers which she has if unleashed will wipe out this universe and the HE in he. Nice didactic effort. I invite you to go through my poem Women

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Godfrey Morris 12 August 2012

Lovely written poem a woman is a keeper of a man's heart. The apple of his eyes.

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