Boredom Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Boredom

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You will feel boredom
Even if u reach stardom
Is there any sense or wisdom?
If there is restriction and no freedom

Individuality will be on vane
Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain
Guided by others on important matters
Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters

You have everything at your disposal
Daily new suggestions and big proposals
Acting on device which is so mechanical
Time may come when need advices only medical

Time and tide wait for none
Fame may be enjoyed for self and alone
It has to come by dint of pure ability
Not by simple praise or enough publicity

Wise may absorb with all its ills
Strong will power may prevail and kill
Simple arrogance and false pride
Not allowing unnecessary things to ride

It is sign of simple maturity
Not even small age may need clarity
It is wisdom and clear long vision
That may bring fame with clear precision

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek
Look so powerful and not to look weak
Almighty may help to achieve the goal
As diamonds are dug from thick black coal

You are product of mighty bless
Whatever you get may not be less
You may have long followers and name in press
Simple fact may emerge and you can’t suppress

High rise or fame is matter of essence
You may feel rightly with HIS presence
All names and honour may be useless in his absence
False stardom or freedom may have no sense

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Twinkle Vohra 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom............10

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Sagarika Shah 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom..........10

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Sachin Goswami 13 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom?

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Kamli Kamal 25 August 2009

Time and tide wait for none Fame may be enjoyed for self and alone It has to come by dint of pure ability Not by simple praise or enough publicity....10

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Suwarna Patil 25 August 2009

Individuality will be on vane Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain......10

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Yes, we are bored because we have too much freedom and, on other occasions, just the opposite lol. It's hard to please oneself.

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Anthony Feghaly 15 October 2009

very intresting i like this poem

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

thank you..................

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Please favor me reading my new posts. Ms.N

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

‘Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain…’ Like tasteful new recipe thro’ wise thoughts with ingredients of words. Great learning Sir. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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